It is what it is (WIP)

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2bme

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I was not happy with the poem and need to improve it.
 
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Everything they said that was
Was never really what it was
Baby girl where are you now?
I need you so bad I could die
Mother earth knew far before
And how I would feel about you
And I need her as I need you
Come and join with me child
Because they're going to fall
Because they're just pretending
About love.
I like your poem, @2bme. Is this a lost loved one? or perhaps something more deeper?
 

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I like your poem, @2bme. Is this a lost loved one? or perhaps something more deeper?
Not lost just miss placed, and as deep as experiencing someone else's emotions day in day out. It just gets too much sometimes when the other person you feel is at odds with you.
 
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People believe that being empathic would be awesome. Sometimes, but mostly it's a nightmare to feel what other people feel. First of all no one can hide their feelings from you, therefore they can't hide their emotional intent. Second, crowded places become a soup of emotional bombardment that feels I'm drowning in. Third, I have to bypass festivals like Christmas, because people are hyper emotionally manic and it's like being blasted with a loud megaphone.
 
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